Tuesday, 16 October 2012

Monarchy


Father was ill. He had been, for the past six months. Anyone who saw him could tell that he was not getting better, despite the team of imperial physicians that slaved day and night for a cure. No one quite knew what he was down with.

His face had lost its radiant glow within the first few days, darkening with some epidermal pigment that turned him hideous. He had also lost pounds in muscle mass, leaving his once-muscled torso and arms weak - he could barely support his own body, and had to be propped up with pillows.

At first, his gaunt look did not affect his fiery vigour in the search for a cure. He needed to get back on his feet so that he could quell the uprisings, appease the townsfolk, and govern the nation well. After all, his grandfather and father before him had done a marvellous job in conquering rival states and unified them under their control – what would they think if he let it fall back to ruin?

However, as the sands of time flowed by, the disease took its toll upon Father, and he had the greatest of difficulties carrying out the smallest of tasks, like sitting up to eat. We knew his time was nigh, but no one dared to say it to his face. After all, he could still order our painful execution with a casual flick of his finger.

Behind his back, the various factions in the palace had already begun to move. Generals indirectly pushed their champion as the next king. As did the queen dowager, the ministers, and anyone who belonged to a clan which had some influence over palace matters. Each sought discreetly to extend that sphere of influence, to puppeteer the next king.

The favourite was of course, my elder brother Yi Lang. He was well-decorated with military honours, tall, handsome, charismatic, and not too bright. Perfect for manipulating.

Next was the queen dowager’s nephew Wen Jun. He was technically still part of the royal family, and therefore a possibility. He was another figurehead, somebody for the queen’s clan to work behind.

I was third. I was too young to participate in the war when Father suppressed the smaller hill tribes and subjected them to his will, and therefore was relatively unknown compared to the aforementioned duo. However, I was intelligent and wily. I had a knack of reading people’s body language. I always knew when Father would slam his hand on the table, flying into one of his rages.

Being relatively unknown, I had to gather my own support from the various factions. I targeted the smaller, stray clans who were constantly neglected and overlooked. I promised them my favour upon ascending the throne if they pledged their allegiance to me.

While my elder brother and Wen Jun clashed head on, I snuck behind the scenes, gently tugging on strings and currying favour from the ministers. The queen dowager and the military generals collided in sparks, all unbeknownst to dear Father.

During the period of mourning for Father’s death, I went about sowing discord within the queen dowager’s factions and the military faction, making the opposing party seem guilty. My plan was to let each clan collapse, then blame the other for that collapse, burn themselves out, and I would inherit the throne.

Right after the stipulated days of mourning, the various factions prepared for the final attack, but true to my plan, both rival clans tumbled splendidly. Fingers pointed and accusations flew – there was even a high-profile murder of the minister of the treasury, the queen’s second nephew by marriage.

This was all working to plan, I thought gleefully. With the backing I secured clan by clan, I emerged onto the scene, shocking both the queen dowager and the military general’s factions. No one had even considered me a potential, potential threat, that is. I easily crushed both factions and mysteriously got rid of my brother and Wen Jun, ascending the throne within a week of Father’s untimely demise.

Monarch at last.

-Odysseus
a friend gave me this topic..I don't like it heh. but well, here it is.
a break from Hal and Jerry. I'll get back to them asap :)

Friday, 12 October 2012

Hal and Jerry Chapter 1 - To The New World

It was three months since they boarded the ship. Three long months of rocking, stale bread, salted fish and drunken company. The boys were promised countless riches and glorious fame if they made it there and back--alive, that is.

Hal was 14 and Jerry was 10. Never Harold and Gerald - just Hal and Jerry. They were orphans, abandoned at the roadside when Jerry was barely weaned. Hal had vague memories of his parents, but never got the urge to know about the parents who had abandoned them.

A kindly old childless couple had taken them in and raised them as their own, until the plague struck and Old Mr and Mrs Becker passed away. Hal had gone door to door, doing odd-jobs to feed himself and Jerry. 

One afternoon Jerry came back from spending all day with the other street urchins shouting animatedly about countless riches and fame, access to parties and posh ballrooms, various delights and delicacies. Hal had laughed at him and ruffled Jerry's head fondly, telling him not to get his head stuck in the clouds.

As tired out by the numerous chores he had done that day, Hal could not sleep. He tossed and turned in the straw, mulling over Jerry's words--what if there was a way out of this? This working-his-butt-off just to merely feed and clothe the two of them. For what seemed like ages Hal lay one way, then the other, but exhaustion eventually pulled him under.

The next morning he decided to follow Jerry to the street urchins. Apparently there was a bunch of lunatics that not only believed that the earth was round, they were going to sail to the New World - where the Spanish found gold, mind you - and come back rich as kings!

As with all hare-brained schemes, this sounded both enticing and dangerous. Mountains of solid gold, heaps of precious jewels that he didn't even know the names of. Oh the things he could do! Hal's mind was made up. He would go to this New World - with Jerry, of course - and come back and never have to lift a finger to feed themselves again.

That was all three months ago. Since then they had not seen the smallest strip of land-- just blue, blue sea, as far as the eye could see. They had met with some unpleasant weather, pirates, and even some incapacitating illness that took out half the crew, but this storm looked the worst yet.

They had braced themselves, tied down all loose items, and tightly furled all the sails. Everyone was wide-eyed and cross-fingered, praying to their various gods for safe passage and a successful journey.

Jerry was still sick from the last bout of flu and was lying below deck, while Hal was on deck, running around on the captain's orders, checking and double-checking that everything was secure.

It was like entering the maw of some primeval monstrosity. The ship was tossed around as if it didn't weigh more than a feather. Gale-force winds and twenty-foot waves threatened to snap the hull like a toothpick. Lightning would flash and light up the sky with vehemence and then thunder would follow, leaving the crew temporarily blind and deaf. The rain stung every inch of exposed skin; like an army of angry red ants sinking their pincers into soft skin over and over again

The storm raged throughout a good part of the night, but maybe the gods heard their prayers and decided to be merciful, and the storm subsided just in time for Hal to enjoy the sunrise.

The sun peeped over the horizon, golden rays racing across the sea-green waves and giving warmth to Hal. He felt renewed, reenergised, ready for a new day...until he saw the ship in its battered condition. His heart fell - he remembered all too clearly the HMS Halcyon in all her christening glory, how it sparkled.

"LAND HO!" the lookout cried, stirring up a near-stampede as each and every crew member ran to the bow, leaning over and craning their necks, all with one intention: to see land.

-Odysseus
I didn't plan for such a long story haha. maybe I'll conclude it within 3 chapters

Tuesday, 9 October 2012

cacophony

Metal clinks on porcelain. Incessant chatter interspersed with laughter from time to time. Bell rings, next up.

Whiff of roast duck, sweet-salty scent wafts towards you from across the table. The tang of lime, charred anise and clove -- sharp. Rich, thick fish maw soup with pepper and vinegar.

Clip, turn, scoop, turn. Watch - is anyone serving? None? Okay, tuuuuuurnn. Ahh, that of which you like.

An outcry! Raised voices, chairs dragged back. Fingers point and elbows jostle. The glass flips, crash!

A moment's shocked silence, then chaos ensues. Wailing from hurt children, defensive shouting from protective parents; all attempts to restore peace ignored.

But they are ignorant. No one but themselves. Accusations spout, blame shoveled, cacophony.

-Odysseus

Tip

7 October

Once more the cruel whip bit into his already-mangled torso. He cried out in sheer agony, his voice hoarse from previous tortures. "FRANK DREW!" he shouted, "01663, armoury unit 12!"

"I already know that, you bastard! I want to know what your army knows, where they're attacking next!"

He gathered what saliva remained from his parched throat and spat at the general. Wiping the spit off of his face, the general hissed, "Don't you worry, dear Frank, we have plenty of time. Either you tell me and we get this over and done with, or I break you completely, past your tipping point. I'll get the information either way. You decide."

His polished leather boots clicked sharply as the general left, leaving the torturer to his devices.

-Odysseus

that night

6 October

There was a soft knock on the heavy oaken door, barely audible. Glancing cautiously through the peephole, I saw a flash of white before the door was blown apart with an explosion that left me clawing at my ears. "They're here," I thought, consciousness slipping away like water into sand. "Must warn--"

-Odysseus

Hello!

Hello! Welcome to my journal of thoughts! I'll be writing random and fictional stories here. Do comment! Everyone is welcome, except that filthy breed of haters.

Enjoy!

-Odysseus